third paragraph of the Comment: The paragraph structure with the total score, by example, assume that, compared to other means to demonstrate. Considering that only two sub-points of the paragraph, so as to join the last sentence in paragraph summary.
To summarize, it is necessary to control the amount of time children spend on TV and video games. In order to tackle the problem, some effective measures like participation in sports and artistic events can be taken. Only by doing so can we ensure the healthy environment where children aged between 7 and 11 grow up.
fourth paragraph of the Comment: Write 2-3 sentence paragraph at the end, concluding remarks, reiterated point of view. Be careful not to appear at the end section of new ideas, and do not sublimate or lyrical.
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